The fic I spent too long writing to delete after it went way darker than it was supposed to

[cathartesaura]

Blame onthe_threshold  for this getting the full re-write here.

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[cathartesaura]

Always, especially on the one that seem to just want to keep getting longer.

I'm more worried about how it can be a make or break weight, admittedly, but so far it seems to not conflict. Especially since it's helping me slow down any dramatic shift I might be tempted to do as she keeps encountering challenges to the faith or girl next door thing.

[onthe_threshold]

But long means more for me to read, soooo... :D

I think also there's a difference between changing on a surface level - like teen rebellion - and really being challenged and changing as a result, you know?

[cathartesaura]

And now I've got more motivation again! Just as there's an epic Matthew post, too.

Yes! And that's exactly what I'm hoping for, because as tempting as the teenage rejection thing is, I think a deeper one makes better end results for reading/writing.

[onthe_threshold]

I've been meaning to write him getting his ass kicked and I finished some poster work so I had time finally!

I agree.

[cathartesaura]

I loved it, and also, you know, am writing a response...

Excellent.